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Ashfurs death by xseashell Ashfurs death by xseashell
Omg ahhh This took me all day D: But I actually did stuff today so yeah XD

Re-draw of (Dont look at that, you'll go blind))

Ahhh I'm proud of this ;u;;

Ashfur you're still my favourite! 8D

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This is amazing. The shading is very good, and they way you portrayed Ashfur's death is very nicely done. I like how Hollyleaf's eyes are shadowed, giving her an evil effect. I love the blood under Ashfur, the splatters are great. Every detail counts, and you made sure it did. This is so amazing, the representation of the characters is nice too. I like how Ashfur kind of looks like he went down fighting. (To me, anyways.) Now, the background is pretty good as well. You didn't put as much detail in it, like the bushes, but the cats make up for it. The backround is still great, and the water is very interesting, I love the shading on the bubbles. You're becoming a great artist, Goldy.
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Ooo, very nice~ : D
I like this : D

Positives:
:bulletblue: I love how you did the lines here, and how they very between thick and thin : D it looks very nicely inked x3
:bulletblue: The shading is very simple, but in a nice way, it's a nice shading style c:
:bulletblue: I love the water : D the way it glitters and all ^^
:bulletblue: The background is also very simple, but in the same, intended style way : D I like it ;D
:bulletblue: The fur looks verrrryyy nice ^^ it's not too spiky, but puffs up in the right places c:
:bulletblue: Nice expression on Hollyleaf's face. c: The shadow on her face and the trickle of blood was a nice touch.

Alright, onto the negatives xD
:bulletred: Ashfur's head seems a bit big for his body.
:bulletred: Since the water's washing up, some of the blood probably should've flown into the water, and some more of it should've washed up on him.
:bulletred: There aren't very many scratches on either one-- it may just be a style preference, but I think since it was such a big struggle and it ended in a death, that Hollyleaf and Ashfur would have a bit more blood on them :'D
:bulletred: His back leg seems a bit out of proportion-- like... it should be back more, I'd guess, like, so it covers the gap between it in the tail. I may be wrong here, but that seems to stick out to me. |D

I may have missed a few things, I'm not sure :'D
But overall this is an amazing picture, and I love your art style, the way you do the lines/shading, everything : D Definite watch from me c:
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FrostedKitty Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
poor ashy. He didn't have to dye. :c
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WildHeartedWarrior Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Ashfur was being a turd!
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FrostedKitty Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
no he wasn't, its Squirrelflights fault Ashfur became this. Ashfur loved Squirrelflight, but she loved Brambleclaw instead. Ashfur cared. Ashy didn't have anything to do with this, and Hollyleaf couldn't handle being half-clan, and wasn't thinking. She killed Ashfur because he knew Leafpools secret, but then again Hollyleaf wasn't thinking. Again, she couldn't handle having her mother being a medicine cat, and her father being from another clan. So Ashfur isn't a turd. Its technically Hollyleaf, and Squirrelflights fault Ashfur was like this.
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CupcakeCarmen123 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I looked @ it anyway! wait...where's the trash bin? :nuu:
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CupcakeCarmen123 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
JK! i couldn't find my glasses!!! (they were on my head. oops. :meow:)
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xseashell Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Noo! It's terrible!! XD
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shadamy20 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Nice job
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xseashell Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankyou c':
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MarsieZeWerewolfie Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O *dies of too much epicness*
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xseashell Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thankyou ;u;;;
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